Show Me Follow Up in Google Docs

The class has been using the Chrome Books every week.   They are getting used to fonts, spacing, shift keys, spell check, deleting, using the tool bar, sharing documents and building stamina.  My students seem to enjoy their Chrome Book time.

These are some student Show Me writing examples that they transferred from their rough drafts into Google Docs. I posted some other Show Me rough drafts a few days ago.

Do you use Show Me writing in your class?  I'd like to hear how you teach descriptive writing.